Please comment my lyric:

can you hear the voices whisperin' in my head?
can you see the laughter foolin' me around?
is everyone goin' deaf?
is everyone goin' blind?

Oooh...i tried to figure out
Why...this happened to my life

I can't stand this anymore
Please someone take me out
Someone pull me out
I can't face this alone
Scared...yeah i'm so scared
Let's Rock The World!!!!