#1
this is one of my worse songs. The better ones i dont post cus i dont need help on. so plz be very criticle if you dont like then say what you dont like. and say it alot. I kinda want this song fixed soon so my band can play for our ex's any way
thanks for leaving lyrics

Thanks for leaving
memories
behind
i start a new
again and again
X2

Riff

Thanks for leaving when i was down
now you can have fun with out me around
now i can fly with out you around
now i can pick myself up of the ground

thanks for leaving
thanks for leaving
when I was down

Riff

Thanks for leavening when i was down
now you can have fun with out me around
now i can fly with out you around
now i can pick myself up of the ground

Now my life has turned around
if i can sore all around town
if i can score just once or twice
shooting blanks to find out why
you need to run and to fly
peeps sore and aim for the sky
they hope may stay
and well i must say

Thanks for leaving when i was down
now you can have fun with out me around
now i can fly with out you around
now i can pick myself up of the ground
solo on guitar

and now you've bean gone
for a long time
I'm starting to wonder if you'll ever come home
i shot a bird and brought it home
my life is never every the same one day

Tomorrow more sorrow
yesterday i met a dame
today I'm leaving
don't stop me your cheating

I am still protective
ill stop you if you tell me
I'm leaving I'm leaving
don't stop me your cheating

Thanks for leaving when I was down
now you can have fun with out me around
now i can fly with out you around
now i can pick myself up of the ground

and now thanks for leaving
I'm leaving too
I don't know what the hell to do
confusion seams so normal now
nothing can affect me now

Thanks for leaving when i was down
now you can have fun with out me around
now i can fly with out you around
now i can pick myself up of the ground
now i can fly with out you around
now i can pick myself up of the ground
Thanks for leaving
when I was down


TABS
ill post later =P its in my note book
5 personalitys offical song wrighter
#2
Ok.

I find it to be too repetitive, and it doesn't really go anywhere.
You repeat words like 'ground' and 'around' too much.

Lines like this:


and now thanks for leaving
I'm leaving too
I don't know what the hell to do
confusion seams so normal now
nothing can affect me now

Could be changed like this for flow:

now thanks for leaving
I'm leaving aswell
I don't know what the hell I'm to do
confusion seems normal now
nothing can affect me now

Hope this helps.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=765558

Thanks!