#1
Just looking for some feedback on our songwriting. The recordings aren't that great...and it's hard to hear our vocalist because he added the vocals himself and doesn't know what he's doing...

But...anyway...

http://www.myspace.com/exmortalis1

Thanks guys.

-Dave(Guitar)

PS: Gordian Knot was our first song...kind of a disaster...We're re-doing it.

Edit: I forgot to mention that only Grace Abandonment has vocals...we're gonna get the vocals on the others soon.
Last edited by m1keh4wk at Oct 29, 2007,
#2
Your drummer is real solid thats the first thing I noticed. Some fills wouldn't hurt though! the guitars are sweet, great riffing, it seems the two guitars work together. The vocals is really the only down fall, he doesn't have a bad vocal range, he just needs to be more audible. Less flemmy LOL, I can't think of a better word !
Originally posted by J_Dizzle
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