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hey
well recently i seem to have little confidence in my songwriting and havent wrote something in a while, so i thought id write something quickly to see what sort of response i got. I think i might start posting more stuff on here just to get your views maybe some of my older stuff, what are the rules is it one song a week or one song a day i cant remember?

anywho it aint got a name yet

i feel like ive been spoken for
in everything we hear
words taken straight from my mouth
ripped all thought and feeling out
misses your heart goes straight through you ears

i can see this getting old
i can see you getting colder
all we need is a spark
a little fire in the darkness

take back what they said
so i can tell you what i really want
without you telling me
you've heard it all before
close your eyes
and ill show you what i really mean
just dont say something like
you've seen it somewhere else

it feels like we're loosing
cos words fail me
i cant even comfort you
cant even help you through this
its just crazy talk
from rogue lips
goes in your ear dont care how much you hear
gives you the ammunition to shoot from the hips

listen to me
im half the man i used to be
even my speech has left me
cos its not worth unless im talking to you
listen to me
listen to me
somethings gone wrong
but let me try n change your mind

take back what they said
so i can tell you what i really want
without you telling me
you've heard it all before
close your eyes
and ill show you what i really mean
just dont say something like
you've seen it somewhere else

i feel like ive said all i can
nothing more i can do now
im holding on by a threadbare heartstring
would you let me fall
how can you let me fall
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