#1
This is the first song I ever wrote

Silent Tears

You said you loved me
Then you said you hated me
And now you want me back
How will I know
That you won't break my heart again?

Everytime I see you
I try to hide
And I cry silent tears
Just wishing that you hadn't
Left me and broken my heart
So now I cry these silent tears

I used to cry myself to sleep
But now I've found someone
Who loves me for who I am
But I still miss you

Everytime I see you
I try to hide
And I cry silent tears
Just wishing that you hadn't
Left me and broken my heart
So now I cry these silent tears

Just wishing that you hadn't
Left me and broken my heart
But now these silent tears have run dry


Feedback would be greatly appreciated
Last edited by Allalou at Nov 1, 2007,
#2
well i think that is a very good first sone..its obviously writen with alot of emotion..im not very knowledable about the theory of it all..but to an untrained songwriter its really good