#1
Lights out and you're ready to go
And you know that your life has passed you by
Cause time does fly
Made the same mistakes all again
This time you back it up with friends
In the end

Save me from myself again
Can't start over
Can't pretend
Save me from myself again
Can't bring back
What's already dead

Times up and you have to show
What you've done with all your time
What's on your mind
Take back all that you gave
Looking for a save from your grave
It's all the same

Repeat Chorus

The song is about living a crappy life then regretting it when you're older....there is a recorded version of the song in Original Recordings forum if anybody wants to here it.
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#2
Well, it's ok. Don't like the use of cliches like 'And you know that your life has passed you by'. You could use more metaphor, imagery, language techniques. Plus it doesn't seem to flow that well. It's just too simple for my likes. Pretty cool music though.
It's gonna be a blue day