#1
I came home tonight , something happened that upset me intensley... I pulled this out of my head, almost like a part of my soul.... I don't normally wright in such an unconventional manner, but this is what came out

What guilt is


rips my soul right at the seams at the thought at what ive done

to push and push one such as myself ,

mindless retaliation, for what could of been much less

try to gain forgiveness for the unforgiven sin

but its a vain attempt, when whats done is done

I caused such pain in unintentional rage

You will not forgive me

So I will



Confide in this music

my fingers on the strings

play a melody of dissatisfaction

and let all that pent up anger ring

Confide in this music

Its all that I know

Such saddened sound amongst the strings

which comfort my tainted hands

rough fingers making smooth soul

confide in this music

give my soul a sanctuary

but only in the house of sound



You would turn away even if you were the cause

And i would simply sit there in my hellish room of thought

This isn't a repairable by any means

It is my thoughtless anger

Permantley turned to haunt my dreams

My lively soul in danger

and i would beg for your forgiveness

Crucify me on your cross

but would rather let me suffer

for the innocence that I've lost

so I will



Confide in this music

my fingers on the strings

play a melody of dissatisfaction

and let all that pent up anger ring

Confide in this music

Its all that I know

Such saddened sound amongst the strings

which comfort my tainted hands

rough fingers making smooth soul

confide in this music

give my soul a sanctuary

but only in the house of sound



In continuance of my guilt

I would get down on my knees

kneel on broken glass of guilt and shame

for this sin is unforgiveable in another kind of way

condemn my soul to living purgatory

would have been better if sent to hell

I'll sell my soul for sorry

but it won't get me a dime of forgiveness

because you have made up your mind

and will leave me to suffer this

I can't explain my sorrow any further than I've done

The pain and guilt that i will gain

will doubtlessly carry on

So I will forever and now





Confide in this music

my fingers on the strings

play a melody of dissatisfaction

and let all that pent up anger ring

Confide in this music

Its all that I know

Such saddened sound amongst the strings

which comfort my tainted hands

rough fingers making smooth soul

confide in this music

give my soul a sanctuary

but only in the house of sound

the house of sound, my only real home

I'll wither there and leave you alone.


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#3
needs.
a demo!
7 String Legion

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Mayones Setius GTM 7
Schecter Hellraiser C-1
GIM Jeffrey Yong Custom 7 String
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