#1
Named After Place of Conception


Hands up if you’ve had enough of disrepute and decadence
Engendered by these household names, these ne’er-do-wells
As shallow as a tinker’s bath; they never thank the Great Unwashed
For all their elbow grease.

In my insides… there resides,
Acid, I’m… like a f*cking battery.
My dear… It’s not your year,
That orange suit… It’s so not you…

[Chorus]
Bring your bedroom eyes
And we’ll cut, we’ll cut this city down to size.
Before your eyes;
A thousand years of history denied.
And how we let you get to pull the strings,
Is really quite a mystery to me.

Keep your silver spoon I’d rather have your ditzy, dainty head
Served up upon a silver plate, you’re nothing but
A mannequin for fancy frocks, a vacuous receptacle
For sauce and cigarettes.

In my insides… there resides,
Acid, I’m… like a f*ckinging battery.
My dear… It’s not your year,
That orange suit… It’s so not you…

[Chorus]
Bring your bedroom eyes
And we’ll cut, we’ll cut this city down to size.
Before your eyes;
A thousand years of history denied.
And how we let you get to pull the strings,
Is really quite a mystery to me.


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So there ya go, hope you like it! Leave a link and I'd love to see yours too!
Last edited by el_jimbo at Oct 31, 2007,
#2
there are some good lines in this piece... "ditzy, dainty head" is the first one that really stands out, and also "vacuous receptacle" is really interesting... in fact that whole stanza is probably the best. I'm a little dissapointed because there are only two verses, and the second one is SO much better than the first. Also, the chorus is really interesting, I'm not sure I have any complaints about that.

enjoyable read.
what comes up comes out
#3
Thanks man Anyone else?
Last edited by el_jimbo at Oct 31, 2007,