#1
i have written down some lyrics, and im trying to play them in 4/4 time, and i was wondering if i could get some criticism on the guitar i have playing for it, so far. its relatively simple, im going for a good sound pattern

it only uses the 5th and 6th string (two widest)


|--------------------------|--------------------------|--------------------------| X whole string
|--------------------------|--------------------------|--------------------------| X whole string
|--------------------------|--------------------------|--------------------------| X whole string
|--------------------------|--------------------------|--------------------------| X whole string
|----3---3-----4---4----|---5----5------6---8---|----9----8----6----4---|
|----1---1-----2---2----|---3----3------4---6---|----8----6----4----2---|

thats the beginning of it