#1
I don’t know what to do,
I never thought I’d end up missing you
Ive been told the story of teenage love
Ive heard it all before, hell its nothing new

Baby you had my heart in your dead cold hand
When you threw it out I could feel it land
Tomorrow I need to find a new way
Now my loving’s in huge demand

How could you ever be so cold?
You know I’ll never fit your mould
And girl I only ask one thing
Stop acting so ****ing old

It’s time you pulled your head down from the sky,
Come back to this world and live a proper life,
It’s polluted, imperfect and you may wonder why
But theres more to life than stupid games and plastic lies

How could you ever be so cold?
You know I’ll never fit your mould
And girl I only ask one thing
Stop acting so ****ing old


Any feekback would be hugely appriciated, as this is my second song
#3
thanks a heap for the feedback man..its me just posting on my new accout..i really appriciate it, i'll work on that and hopefully i can come out with an ok song...so yeah thanks, the more feedback the more i learn
#4
ohh lol..well thats ok, just get them to ban the other account..i decided it was time to get over the name pink_boy..i grew out of it