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The first one
25 100%
the second one
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Voters: 25.
#3
Evaluation;

Melancholy

Excellent. Very nice piece. I like the structure, especially the way it breaks into a quieter little interlude about 3/4 of the way through. Dynamics could have been used to better effect but the pace was good and I liked the melody (I normally only like clearly defined melodies, for example I don't like most of Ocean by JBT, the melody isn't defined enough.) But I liked it here. All I would say is that it could do with a little bit more polish to it, just the kind that comes from playing it over and over and getting it perfect every time.

Get a Grip

I'm afraid to say I didn't like this at all. I thought vocals were disallowed? I thought it was purely an instrumental competition, but I'll crit regardless. I didn't like the vocals or the tone, and the general composition wasn't great. There were some funny rhythmic moments where it kinda broke off into something totally different and unrelated which I didn't get. But this really isn't my type of music so don't take it to heart that I didn't like it! Perhaps someone with a different musical taste will like it more.

My vote goes to Melancholy.

Am pleasantly surprised by the quality of the start. You were right Confusius!
#4
Well there was an exception made because I couldn't be bothered waiting any more, hence the vocals, not this is a ONCE AND ONLY exception.


In future, all pieces will always be instrumental...
#5
Melancholy - Great instrumental, really enjoyed it, thums up.

Get a grip - Really didnt like it, sorry.
#6
Melancholy - I enjoyed it, excellent.

Get a grip - Uhm, not so excellent.
I Like Cake
#7
^ Hey, can we make the polls public next time?

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Partscaster/Tele into a bunch of pedals, a Maz 18 head, and a Z Best cab.
#9
am i the only one that doesn't see any songs in the first guy's purevolume space?
#11
Melancholy - Really liked this one, it flowed nicely and was easy on the ears.

Get a grip - Can't say the same for this one. Maybe its just me but i struggled to listen to the whole song.
#12
Quote by roamingbard13
^ Hey, can we make the polls public next time?

is there a need for it being public? lol its 13-0 right now as it stands....
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Quote by MiasmA
guys, i got it. pucture = the rare breed of green fruits that tend to laugh scoffingly and then question a statement. AKA lolwut pears

CASE CLOSED..
#13
Damnit I still can't see any song on the guy's purevolume page. I've tried at work and at home now!
#15
i sure am not.
Proud Owner of a 2006 Taylor GS Big Leaf Maple/ Sitka Spruce
#16
I understand ur replies. Frankly I'm not too happy with the recording. The energy which I have live is has not translated a 10th on to the recording. I had serious issues with the recording and while doing the vocals. For some reason it always sounds funny, it doesn't sound so live. So I don't know. I'm more of a acoustic songwriter....

Get a Grip

It seems like yesterday
Killing time, drinking pints
All of us by the bay
Waiting for the sun to rise

Well time just passed me by
And now none of us ever meet
Working hard just to buy
Everything that you don't need

Everyone except me

I need to get a grip, get a grip, get a grip on life
Get a grip, get a grip on this life
Get a grip, get a grip, get a grip on life

I remember your face
Glowing by the candle light
And all the promises we made
That have now turned into lies

Time made us go
In all different directions
I wish I got some time
To watch that sunrise
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invincibleneo - you are one of the only people in this thread that talk sense.
#20
why is this stickied ?
<Raven> I got so baked last night
<Raven> that I WOKE UP high o_o
<Raven> Do you have any idea how euphoric that is?
<Raven> I felt like I was being born.
#22
Quote by C.C. Deville
why is this stickied ?

because Jon and I both endorse this contest.
#23
Quote by jimtaka
because Jon and I both endorse this contest.


And because my threads are incredibly cool...


Quote by confusius
Because my threads are incredibly cool...

If he says it, it must be true!
#24
^self quoting ftl...
<Raven> I got so baked last night
<Raven> that I WOKE UP high o_o
<Raven> Do you have any idea how euphoric that is?
<Raven> I felt like I was being born.