#1
I came from the thing in the sky
I enterd through the O-zone
Ill live in your Lies
Your body is my home
Where did you get that beautiful peice of information?
that unlawful knowlage
my beautiful lover
my bound in faultage
the solar eclipse of your 3rd sun
the craze of failures

there is no god in blackwholes
there is no hope in the eyes of a titan
there is no warmth out here
there is no home where you are going
there is no memories in my cold
there is no numbers in this section
there is no books where I call home
there is no mind of your own

When I move the stars
Then I know where we are
I throw darts at the earth
I feel no pain just the hurt

Get up get up get up
SHUT UP SHUT UP SHUT UP

Before you know it
THEY ARE HERE

The bacteria showed me how
ground zero was found
I killed all the astronots
I ****ed all the space *****s
The arena is out here now
the real outlaw was found
I shoot lasers in the air
I think ill stay longer
Its cold out there

Im not the enemy here
Im not the super hero
Im not the killer here
Im not to inoscent though
Im not here to harm you
Im only here to kill you
The fruits of my labor


When I move the stars
Then I know where we are
I throw darts at the earth
I feel no pain just the hurt

Get up get up get up
SHUT UP SHUT UP SHUT UP
SHUT THE **** UP!!

Before you know it
THEY ARE HERE

The most beautiful thing
Is the
The most vicious thing
Is me

When I move the stars
Then I know where we are
I throw darts at the earth
I feel no pain just the hurt

Get up get up get up
SHUT UP SHUT UP SHUT UP

Before you know it
THEY ARE HERE
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Last edited by Sexamps at Nov 1, 2007,
#2
Interesting, pretty imaginative song.

The bacteria showed me how
ground zero was found
I killed all the astronots
I ****ed all the space *****s
The arena is out here now
the real outlaw was found
I shoot lasers in the air
I think ill stay longer
Its cold out there


i liked this verse, and there was some repetition.
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#4
ok cool song, but get up get up get up, SHUT UP SHUT UP SHUT UP
is already part of a very famous song by good charlotte. called Shut up
#5
very good song...dont have much time to crit might later though and Iguitar...first off it was by simple plan and second the words are switched around in the simple plan song it goes "shut up, shut up, shut up dont wanna hear it, get up get"etc. etc. so its perfectly fine being in the song, and I like the way you use it too
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