#1
I put it into song form, tell me what you think. I'll try C4C but I'm no expert, so...yeah.


Verse 1
Your tongue is like a razor blade
Piercing skin with every muscle
motion that you always make.
Why don't you drink the blood?
I guess it isn't sweet enough
I would coat my veins in sugar
if it meant feeling your tongue

Pre-Chorus
Taste my mind and infect my soul,
With your poetic poison, dripping

Dripping thicker than the statement
That your eyes so clearly make

Chorus
So salt the wound and rend my mind
Before I paint you're eager eyes,
A shade of white, put on a show,
I just get off to dying slow

Turn down the song, off with the light
The ghost you made, he says goodnight.
You are gone, but I know you know
I just get off to dying slow.

Verse 2
Your mouth is like a guiding hand
Turn your head, because this is murder
you don't believe in morphine,
please fray my nerve endings?
So I can never feel again.
Rip my heart out of my head,
See? Now you're stained a violet red.

Chorus
So salt the wound and rend my mind
Before I paint you're eager eyes,
A shade of white, put on a show,
I just get off to dying slow

Chorus 2
Turn down the song, off with the light
The ghost you made, he says goodnight.
You are gone, but I know you know
I just get off to dying slow.
#3
Meh. I'm disinclined to acquiesce to your request.

...The title is my favorite part XD