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Hi.

This weekend my uncle Danny is putting down vocals on my songs. The first song finished is called "In denial". I hope you like it and I appreciate feedback on vocal, mix, master, instrument. I crit you back. Stay metal!

Song "In denial" on my profile: My profile

Lyrics:

BIG MOUTH TALKIN BOUT THE THINGS YOU´VE DONE
ALL I THINK OF BROTHER YOU ARE FOOLIN NONE
BUILD YOUR CASTLE WITH THE WORDS YOU SAY
AND WHEN THE STORM COMES IT WILL BLOW YOUR WORLD AWAY

IF YOU TAKE ANOTHER LOOK I WONDER WHAT YOU WILL SEE
LISTEN TO ME, BECOME A PART OF HISTORY
INSTEAD OF POINT YOUR FINGER TO THE ONES YOU´RE LONGIN TO BE
STANDIN IN TRIAL FOR BEIN IN DENIAL
IF YOU TAKE ANOTHER LOOK THERE´S ONLY TROUBLE TO SEE
CLEARLY TO ME, YOU´RE GOIN DOWN IN HISTORY
FOR BEIN THE ONE YOU´LL NEVER WANTED TO BE
STANDIN IN TRIAL FOR BEIN IN DENIAL

SO YOU JOIN THE ARMY TO PROVE YOU´RE A MAN
WANNA LOOK SHARP IN UNIFORM AND GOLDEN TAN (HA HA)
SAVE YOUR BREATH, DON´T WANNA HEAR IT NO MORE
HOW YOU MARCH WITH KILLERS, GLORIFYIN YOUR WAR

IF YOU TAKE ANOTHER LOOK I WONDER WHAT YOU WILL SEE
LISTEN TO ME, BECOME A PART OF HISTORY
INSTEAD OF POINT YOUR FINGER TO THE ONES YOU´RE LONGIN TO BE
STANDIN IN TRIAL FOR BEIN IN DENIAL
TAKE ANOTHER LOOK THERE´S ONLY TROUBLE TO SEE
CLEARLY TO ME, YOU´RE GOIN DOWN IN HISTORY
FOR BEIN THE ONE YOU´LL NEVER WANTED TO BE
STANDIN IN TRIAL FOR BEIN IN DENIAL

TAKIN A LIFE CAUSE YOU DON´T GOT A LIFE
TAKIN A LIFE CAUSE YOU DON´T GOT A LIFE, PITY YOUR LIFE
TAKIN A LIFE CAUSE YOU DON´T GOT A LIFE
TAKIN A LIFE CAUSE YOU DON´T GOT A LIFE, I PITY YOUR LIFE
TAKIN A LIFE CAUSE YOU DON´T GOT A LIFE
TAKIN A LIFE CAUSE YOU DON´T GOT A LIFE, PITY YOUR LIFE
TAKIN A LIFE CAUSE YOU DON´T GOT A LIFE
TAKIN A LIFE CAUSE YOU DON´T GOT A LIFE, I PITY YOUR LIFE

IF YOU TAKE ANOTHER LOOK I WONDER WHAT YOU WILL SEE
LISTEN TO ME, BECOME A PART OF HISTORY
INSTEAD OF POINT YOUR FINGER TO THE ONES YOU´RE LONGIN TO BE
STANDIN IN TRIAL FOR BEIN IN DENIAL
IF YOU TAKE ANOTHER LOOK THERE´S ONLY TROUBLE TO SEE
CLEARLY TO ME, YOU´RE GOIN DOWN IN HISTORY
FOR BEIN THE ONE YOU´LL NEVER WANTED TO BE
STANDIN IN TRIAL FOR BEIN IN DENIAL