Poll: Grey, or Green?
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View poll results: Grey, or Green?
Grey
9 82%
Green
2 18%
Voters: 11.
#1
Waxman and the Museum of Wicks

the pretty waxmen
and their flawless, aching smiles.
picture perfect postures caricatured
on pin-up perceptions.

we place feathers under
candle kings like we place the
madcap over the face
of a newly crowned widow and
her faded red finger-painted dress.
even though the children
can’t fashion pieces so full of
unabashed emotion we’re happy
to force smiles and label them modern Picassos
anyway. and then we wonder why the
walls end up painted in blood.

chickens have feathers.

ironic? probably not.

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I
The blame game can only go so far before it becomes battleship.
The constant denial of ones actions,
Leaving the world at a loss for truth,
Without the single, slightest clue,
As this is just what we know,
This is what makes us human,
This is what drives us,
To live on like false parrots.
But all can be changed,
By a simple answer,
That is ignored,
As most are,
But with one word,
One word:
I.
New ideas,
New lives,
Can come from this,
Because it is the epitome of self.
That which we avoid continuously,
And at absolutely all costs.
It can represent a lifetime or a moment,
Though we’re terrified of both.
Verity is slipping away from us,
Slowly but surely we’re tearing each other apart,
Because above all that’s what we’re afraid of.
We’re scared to trust and be trusted,
As this would mean welcoming others into a very firm bubble,
And it would put a halt to the current world of, an I for an I.

O! music: Click (Youtube)


^ Click to see an acoustic arrangement of Ke$ha's 'Your Love is my Drug' - everyone's favourite song.
Last edited by Snowblind 911 at Nov 5, 2007,
#2
Awesome piece.

I wasn't sure if that was the end though... the 'g' in slipping was cut off when you sent it to me... so i'm not sure if there is supposed to be anything after that.

Just post the rest if you want [if there is any more] and I'll edit it into the first post.
O! music: Click (Youtube)


^ Click to see an acoustic arrangement of Ke$ha's 'Your Love is my Drug' - everyone's favourite song.
#3
Both are spectacular pieces. Good work to both of you. If you must know, I went with grey, because of:

her faded red finger-painted dress.
even though the children
can’t fashion pieces so full of
unabashed emotion we’re happy
to force smiles and label them modern Picassos


^that section. I just loved it.

Return the favor please... Vote on my 1v1 (in sig)
#4
Quote by Snowblind 911
Awesome piece.

I wasn't sure if that was the end though... the 'g' in slipping was cut off when you sent it to me... so i'm not sure if there is supposed to be anything after that.

Just post the rest if you want [if there is any more] and I'll edit it into the first post.


Thanks, great piece yourself

and yeah, the rest is:

Verity is slipping away from us,
Slowly but surely we’re tearing each other apart,
Because above all that’s what we’re afraid of.
We’re scared to trust and be trusted,
As this would mean welcoming others into a very firm bubble,
And it would put a halt to the current world of, an I for an I.
#5
ah i cant read tonight!!!!!! If I can I would like to verbally switch my vote...I accidentally hit grey but meant green....if not oh well...sorry ....me feel stoopid
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