#2
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tune to standard less double bass less harmonics the it would be alright
#3
i think it was pretty cool

should maybe work on it more turn it into a full track with a better structure and maybe try detail the drums more, you can get a decent sound out of some drum programing and considering your bored lol you will have plenty of time! yay

but overall i reckon cool idea let me know if you work on it more id love have a listen

cheers bretto

check out some of my songs if ya want ,only one that is finished is (smash) the others are just idears

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#5
yeah i reckon if you spent a bit more time the song would sound pretty sick