crit as i go
vocals are a little too overpowering in my opinion, sing a little softer... wait, your playing with the recording.. ur timing is off with the recording sometimes... try doing it without the recording... its hard to judge since the real song is playing in the background... why do you stop playing in some parts? my suggestion would be to learn to play the entire song and play without the recording... vocals arent terrible but they are too loud most of the song... and once again the timings off and it makes it sound horrible in some parts
its got potential, it just needs some work

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