#1
is this fantasy trying it's hardest to be
a prison break waiting to happen to me?
forced to be still, break free it will
this anxiety grows & it's better
than waiting for nebulas to bloom in summer
do you fancy this? a slight reminisce?

a month and a half vanished in front of my eyes
& i am left with the thoughts of a perfect sunrise
the warning is set, please don't forget
be lucid in your sleep child
fingerpaint & make that dream come alive
now look what you've done. the masterpiece has formed a son

do you know what it feels like?
do you know? have you ever been there before?
do you know what it feels like?
do you know? have you ever been there before?

like a ten year old with a new bicycle
i'm treading familiar ground with this foreign vehicle
awkard it seems? well, more than you think
elusive & consuming, the ambient screams
enticing it's will to break free
close your eyes & see what it's like to be an artist

do you know what it feels like?
do you know? have you ever been there before?
do you know what it feels like?
do you know? have you ever been there before?
#2
I like the verses alot...very creative and great flow and rhyme scheme, but as for the chorus, its just a little weak and cliche' so i think you can do something better with this if you try. Again though, your verses are outstanding, nicely done

6/10 (only because your chorus, maybe try to add another verse in there somewhere)

Check out my song and see what you think
When Angels Learn to Fly - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=681879