#2
why did you slow the song down? it sounds good for a beginner, but I stick with my own style in solo's (full of pinch harmonics, dubbelstring bends,etc...) it sounds more natural if you use your own solo's, this is studied, no good
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#4
put on a version with just one take, itll do much better since its difficult, not being a pro, to make two takes fit each other
#5
you guys aren't criticizing the solo at all...
dude it was fine, except for on some bends you didn't bend enough to get the right pitch.
#6
Quote by zerodeck
why did you slow the song down? it sounds good for a beginner, but I stick with my own style in solo's (full of pinch harmonics, dubbelstring bends,etc...) it sounds more natural if you use your own solo's, this is studied, no good


What?

No good?

I haven't listened yet but you can't say it's no good because he played the solo as it is.

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#7
oh i dont want to criticize, just wanna give a little advice to better impress listeners
#8
Thanks for the suggestion swinghead, i took out the second track and re-uploaded it .
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#9
alright needs a little work, especially on the bends. you need to hold the bends and give em some vibrato like angus does. but your well on ur way
#10
pretty good, this makes me want to learn that solo! now you should work on timing. "but your well on ur way"
#11
ur bends aren't reaching the notes. u gotta work on that. u got nice sound. really edgy like angus young's sound. but yea. the bends. please.
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#12
Thanks alot for the feedback guys . I'll keep working on those bends and timing as those are the main things that kill me.
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#13
Not bad at all my friend. Keep working on it, you'll nail it soon.
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