#1
http://www.myspace.com/jakeskubisz

i've been working on it for a while but really started recording it a few days ago. i had a bass in it as well but couldn't get it to work really, at least without drums.

anyway, hope you enjoy the song! i crit back always, unless you consider a three word response a "crit."

thanks
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#2
wow, you don't suck. thats cool. i like it.

i'd just have gone without the double vocals later in the song though.
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#3
one can't say whether music is 'good' or not because everyone has different opinions, all you can say is 'i like it'

and i my friend say 'i like it' i really do.
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#4
wow thanks guys, that cheers me up quite a bit haha. thanks, really.

the double vocals... i never really know what to do with that. i did want to do the harmonies, but i know what you mean, in the second verse. on second though, maybe i shouldn't have. but everythings a demo, everything can be changed.


but will i? probably not unless i record it with better equipment
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#5
This is really good, I like it a lot. You remind me a bit of Willy Mason for some reason. I personally think the double vocal bit's good: it thickens it out well. That leads me to my next point: the vocals. They're spot on and the melody's perfect for the song.

All I can suggest is that you could overdub some guitar towards the end to really build it up before the end.

Great song, good job, I like it!
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#6
wow thanks for the responses guys...


you're right. i should've overdubbed the guitar parts... that would've made it much better. i already had two tracks going and i was messing with them but couldn't figure it out. i don't know why i didn't think of another track.
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