The riffs are decent, but you use way too much gain... even for metal (or a really ****ty mic) basically, I heard a lot of feedback and very few notes. It's hard to tell how good your playing was through all the distortion.
ESP Custom Shop 40th Anniversary Eclipse
ESP Standard Eclipse-II
Ibanez AF85VLS
yeah this is our microphone's fault.
We're just using a little mac behind screen microphone.

Other opinions?
I'd really like to know what you think whatever if it's good or bad.