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hey UG,
i was just watching TV and the idea of writing a poem came up.i started and this was the result. this my first poem/lyrics and if it sucks could you please tell me why

too weak to fight
i know it shows
too much pride to run
but i know i lost

i now stand here
fallen in the midst
beaten for the first time
with blood on my lips

i'm now in pieces
in numbers can't count
but you still beleive me
without a trace of doubt

you gave me sight
when i was blind
you helped me walk
when i can't stand

you are an angel
the angel that saved me
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The Pit is to intelligence what a black hole is to light; it's devoid of reason and logic, and nothing can escape it's shadowy depths. Once you enter, you cannot leave.