Like in her house, like bombs are dropping
like mooch food, like going shopping
like big ears like pill popping,
like my mind

Like retard like insecure
like doesn't know the score
like keepin' cool when you're off the floor
like in my mind.

Like hearing trains like ugly veins
like hate you now, like hear me out
like super screwed, like be a dude
like in my mind.

Like in the nuthouse, like in my mind
like **** you everyone, like in my mind
Like no spine, like sippin' wine, like in my mind.
Like crazy, am so lazy, just like my mind.

like fretboard like a tool
like do drugs like stay in school
like no trust, like being cool
like in my mind.

Like jealous like **** no
like i just wanna go
like they will hold me down
like in my mind.

Like oh ****, here it comes
Like just play the fool and run
like i'll do things just for fun
like in my mind.


This is the second time around for this song, first one got closed. Some guy told me it was "****" at least he/she's honest.
okay first things first man i loved it i really like how that you used the word LIKE i think you have wonderful word usage and whenevr that i sung it to myself i really like how that everything flowed together it was great keep up the good work and the next time you write something send me a link. i would love to crit some more of your stuff
iguess check out what i wrote and tell me what you think?

one more thing i think its time to start killing the brownshirts again
thats for anyone who knows anything about history!!!!!!!
since you critted mine i will crit yours. I like the idea of like but mayb change it in the chorus but i really dont no i would take the likes outta the chorus cept like in my mind keep that