#1
A song I wrote recently. Looking for some CONSTRUCTIVE critisicm.

You are my angel, my life
The only one who keeps me sane
The only one who makes me feel like I belong
Like I can be the person I really am

When I'm with you the world looks tranquil
And all my pain seems to float away
The connection I feel is like nothin' else
Somethin' that can't be explained

It's obvious I've fallen in love with you
Given away my heart to you
Normally I would feel vulnerable
But, I feel so safe with you

It seems I've had an epiphany
That you are the one for me
I'll be there for you no matter what
I will always love you

Theres been times where I thought I'd gone insane
But when you said, "I Love You," back I knew it was no dream
The only dreams are those of the future
Those of what we could do together
"You don't become a rock star unless you've got something missing somewhere, that is obvious to me. If you were of sound mind you could feel normal without 70,000 people a night screaming their love for you"

-Bono
#2
I don't even have any complaints with this. Usually, with a piece of this length I end up reading over it several times finding more and more to talk about with each read. I can't say I find any noticeable flaws in this. It's simply to the point and something that everyone can relate to in some way or another. Great job.
i look down at my hands,
like they were mirrors.