#1
Evening all,

Basically I was looking at a Goo Goo Dolls tab (Black Balloon) and really liked the tuning (I believe it's Open C#) and the way it emphasises the open notes and really aided the acoustic sound. So, as always, I wrote a few riffs and composed this little song. It's been written in a matter of hours so it's not great, and as we all know, gpro doesn't really give a great acoustic sound...but anyway, have a look and see what you think. C4C as always

Cheers, Ben

PLEASE TURN OFF RSE - IT KILLS THE SONG!!!
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open_c#acoustic.zip
Last edited by b101 at Nov 7, 2007,
#2
That was lovely. Great melodies that all fitted well and well defined rhythm (very important in an acoustic song). Only thing I didn't really like about it was the part starting at bar 52, in which the two parts didn't really compliment eachother sometimes, there's a few clashes which you might want to reconsider. Aside from that it was beautiful, nice return to the refrain at the end.

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#3
Men, that was amazing! Please tell me when you have something. That at bar 52 wasn`t so good. Maybe replace the Db by a A? (normally G string 1st fret) But keep doing that!
#4
yeah will be looking at the little bar 52 section later, just need something to slow it down before the bridge bit...
#5
Very nice song, everything fits together. Good job man!

Please crit my song
It isnt done yet, but I'm working on it.


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