#1
Here is what I think a cool song I made was, criticism would be wonderful.

EDIT: Now here is an updated one, I'll C4C.
Attachments:
Sweden.zip
Listen to my songs, but only if you are prepared for the greatest experience of your life .
Last edited by RHCPguitarist4 at Nov 8, 2007,
#2
its good for an intro, you should write more to it, lower the volume of the choir ahs cause they out stand the guitar, also i didn't like the sound of the drums following the guitar strumming patterns.

mind critting mine?(new one in sig) thanks.
#3
Not bad. I would maybe watch the volume of the rythym guitar when it first comes in and the piano. It sounded pretty cool though.
#4
Pretty awesome definatly. but the nylon acoustic was pretty loud and overbearing compared to the piano. Also, I think you should make the drums slowly come in and not just "BAM" all up in there =P Good job though
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