#1
When Everyone turns on each other and the whole world crys
This is going to be the day when calmness and peace die
and this moment is going to come without any warning
This is the day Darkness Rises In The Morning

Freedom will be gone, peace will be disturbed
And everyone is going to live, without being heard
Darkness will rise, lightness will die
and not one single soul will be heard, not even a cry

When Everyone turns on each other and the whole world crys
This is going to be the day when calmness and peace die
and this moment is going to come without any warning
This is the day Darkness Rises In The Morning

Evil is going to come, and we must be ready
But we don't know when, so we got to keep steady
When this darkness comes it won't expect a fight
but we got to, so we can save what we think is right

When Everyone turns on each other and the whole world crys
This is going to be the day when calmness and peace die
and this moment is going to come without any warning
This is the day Darkness Rises In The Morning

Morning will come, but the night won't go away
But we are going to fight so it doesn't happen this day
we can hold back this darkness of wrong
all we need is to believe in faith an stay strong

When Everyone turns on each other and the whole world crys
This is going to be the day when calmness and peace die
and this moment is going to come without any warning
This is the day Darkness Rises In The Morning
When Everyone turns on each other and the whole world crys
This is going to be the day when calmness and peace die
and this moment is going to come without any warning
This is the day Darkness Rises In The Morning

and this moment is going to come without any warning
This is the day Darkness Rises In The Morning
repeats as it fades out
#2
man man man you did a GREAT job with that i loved every part it i think you have some deffinent talent when it comes to song writing i dont have anything bad to say about it at all it was really really really good i am going to have to crit the other stuff you've written beacuse i think if its half as great as what i just read then its got to be good anyways i would like you to read and tell me what you think about what i've written its called
heroin cant take away your pain
the link is
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=702624
#3
Woah! This is awesome! Like said above, I have nothing bad to say, and I definitely think it is a great song. Is it Heavy metal? It also sounds a bit like Rap, but I have no idea. Anyways, the song is absolutely amazing!
#4
Quote by black amendment
Woah! This is awesome! Like said above, I have nothing bad to say, and I definitely think it is a great song. Is it Heavy metal? It also sounds a bit like Rap, but I have no idea. Anyways, the song is absolutely amazing!


no, it's going to be heavy, but not heavy metal, IDK how to explain it.

and thanks to both of you for the comments on the song.