#2
your scream makes me think of like evil gremlins or something lol.
but its good
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#5
i like it!! btw.. what part of ontario do you live in?
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#7
Vocals are way to loud. I can barely hear anything else so I really can't tell if it's that's great. And I don't like the way you recorded the vocals, the input volume is too loud or something and you might have used a bad mic or something.
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#8
the fight club thing in the beginning sounds so cool, but the scream feels to early. the recording quality is bad (it sounds like you're raping the microphone), and i don't really like the screaming. i like the instrumentals though
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#9
i used a shure sm-58, which is a pretty good mic...
i didn't record the vocals my friend did it for me, like he did all the volumes and stuff i just screamed. he's not exactly the best at it i guess aha.

and punkrocklite i live in a small town called "stirling" which is near belleville, which you probaby have never heard of. ahahaha.
#10
i also don't know if this has anything to do with it, but i'm only 15... and just started screaming like a month ago.
i'm still trying to work on getting a better scream, so thats probably why it sucks.