Hey, I was sitting here trying to learn "One" by Metalica, and I started messing around on my guitar. Soon after, I had an Intro, Verse, Intro Solo, and Bridge of a new song I'm working on. I'm kind of stuck on names, and was wondering if anyone had some good tips/ideas for it. Here's what I have so far(Its only one verse!)

All of my emotions
will eventually rise,
lost inside my thoughts,
never asked why..
How can I understand,
this feeling inside my soul?
Now I take your hand..
and you'll pay the toll

Any good ideas? It's a slow song to begin with(just like One), and will gradually turn into a heavy, chunky song. It's a work in progress, but I'm sure It will be one of my best songs ever written(by myself, that is.) Please tell me you thoughts/concerns! Thank you.
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