#1
come up from earth
come up from soil
fill me with wonder that i should not know
tomes of unspoken
words of revival
to bring back what was slaughtered aeons ago

chanting ascending node
forgotten rites enscribed by the insane
recanting faith in those
who shall have led me to sweet higher plane

i see ground move
i hear salt form
i smell fear as your mind once more awakes
i feel your hand in mine as Eibon is fast thrown aside
hauled up, eternal slumber i break

chanting ascending node
forgotten rites enscribed by the insane
recanting faith in those
who shall have led me to sweet higher plane

gazing unto your face
it is unhuman
flash of pain
struck down
into grave i fall

staring out my dying eyes
this has all gone wrong
spend my last seconds wondering
where are you from?
Last edited by J.A.M at Nov 9, 2007,
#2
Alright, lemme start of by saying that I think this piece was really cool and innovative. It might help that I read some fantasy books, but for some reason, I could picture Ozzy or Megadeth doing this song. This was a very cool song, very well written. I think you really managed to put an image along with this song, while conveying a suttle point. If you ever post anything else, please let me know, because I would love to take a look at it.
#3
Okay, now this is cool! Played out perfectly...suggestion though, and it might help; if you've played any video games that deal with necromancy (ES IV Oblivion, Diablo II, etc) try picking up a bit of lingo the necromancers use in it...like I said, it's great the way it is, but this way could make it even more neat and unique!

give mine a look and tell me if its near as good as yours!
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=716871
#4
this is cool
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