#1
This is my second song today. Plz rate. It's called "I Need Someone (To Make Me Happy)" Enjoy:

Verse

Emotions flying,
Heart is pounding,
Anger of mine,
I feel all the time...

Chorus

But I don't wanna feel this way,
I want you to stay,
And make the anger go away,
And I think I know what I need,
I need someone to make me happy...

Verse

Ruins my fun,
I wanna run,
away from hate,
cuz I can't accept this fate...

Bridge

I wish you'd stay,
Don't go away,
I get worse every day,
Please stay and play...
#2
one big cliche :p
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#3
GIGANTIC vagina-stylized cliche... either it'll sound like a contemporary emo song or like one of those hair metal ballads of the 80s depending on your tempo and guitar tone behind it.

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#4
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GIGANTIC vagina-stylized cliche... either it'll sound like a contemporary emo song or like one of those hair metal ballads of the 80s depending on your tempo and guitar tone behind it.

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