#1
Okay, been a while since an original song. I tried rhyming this one and I must say, it's much harder to do. I think it came out okay... I WILL be making this one into a song hopefully in the next couple days so be on the lookout for that. I've got some nice riffs made up for this baby. Alright, onto the lyrics:

"The atmosphere up here is thinning,
so lend me some air.
The world's changing, but we're still spinning,
and I still care.

Take my heart and break me with it.

You and me are in my dreams,
Sitting somewhere making memories.
And I'll take just one more breath before,
Before reality.

The internal clock is still ticking,
counting down seconds to your heart.
Your memory in my head is sticking,
This is the hardest part.

Take my heart and break me with it.

You and me are in my dreams,
Sitting somewhere making memories.
And I'll take just one more breath before,
Before reality.

Steal my anxiety,
if you're not gonna stay with me.
I'll keep you deep, deep down,
and out of my reality.

You and me are in my dreams,
Sitting somewhere making memories.
And I'll take just one more breath before,
Before reality.
"
#3
Quote by cerealkiller665
itll be a hell of a lot of easier if you at least put up the riffs,
then ill try something.
=]


You'll have to wait buddy They'll come in time. For now, judge the lyrics.