#1
I close my eyes, and
All I can see is you
I don’t know why, or
What the hell I can do
It seems that we, are
Coming to an end
But can’t you see,
It’s on you that I depend

It’s not too late, to
Figure all this out
So I just wait, filling
With self-doubt
We’re so far, from
Everything that we were
Now there’s no star, that
Can light up my world

And when the time
Comes you’ll see
How much you mean
to me
But still youu
Won’t stay
So I’ll watch
You fade away

Its been 3 days, since
I last heard from you
Oh what went wrong, no
I don’t have a clue
I just wanna fly, get
away from this all
But Everytime I try,
All I seem to do is fall

And when the time
Comes you’ll see
How much you mean
to me
But still youu
Won’t stay
So I’ll watch
You fade away

After All the times that we had
All the good, and the bad
Will you still remember me
And all we could have been

And when the time
Comes you’ll see
How much you mean
to me
But still youu
Won’t stay
So I’ll watch
You fade away

And when the time
Comes you’ll see
How much you mean
to me
But still youu
Won’t stay
So I’ll watch
You fade away
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#3
its quality - the only piece that I didn't think flowed very well was the part you kept repeating, which i'm assuming is the chorus.
The whole idea for this is overused but I understand you writing about it. I've written so many pieces about similar situations, its good to just get it out of your system.