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ooph i do hope this is in the right bit, i read the rules and theyre SO complicated, so sorry all you moderator people
ANYWAYS

here we are. written at two am after a whole large kerfuffle

Freedom comes at last
to girl who watched as dead time passed
and oppurtunities-
new age
new advantage.

Unsure of how to let it go
a drunken night, or take it slow?
the crowds a-waiting
lets not leave them standing.

bridgy thing:
Time transporter take me back!
to cheeks or red and suits of black,
excited yawns throughout six months of waiting...

chorus:
Well she not actually too sure where she heard
but the "somethings" all happen to be expert
and V words gotten worse than V sign when you've hit the year
for redemption in informal form
from year 5 sneers and year 9 taunts.
for once the clothes are not the fashion, darling.

The protection that you really need's
from kids with pressure fulled by greed
"carried away"'s a term for if your willing

Deliberately loose fit shirt
with faded jeans and no short skirt
but they lie to get laid
if its.. fitting

bridgy thing
chorus

Its just a word
he never heard
and so he carries on
he carries on [x4]


thare we are!
please, tell me how i could improve it or something!
thanking you all
and have a LOVELY day