#1
As you were wishing (for a change)
Biting your thumb at our names
We wish you good luck (just shut the **** up)
Caress civilization's hopes with the back of your hand....

Holding us back
Holding us back
Like a light in the dark
like a light in the dark

Your pushing us down (your pushing us down)-scream
back to the silence.
back to the silence

Break a shadow,
You’d shatter a heart.
Rip out our lungs,
Your Tearing us apart.
Dont tell me this is real
look what your doing (changing our appeal)-scream

In a whisper to the storm,
We raise up our fists.
Breaking you down,
while your struggling to resist.
Don’t tell us no(its far too late)-scream
We’ll show you consequence.
Back to the dark with you
You ugly conniving bitch.

Holding us back
Holding us back
Like a light in the dark
like a light in the dark

Your pushing us down (your pushing us down)-scream
back to the silence.
back to the silence

And as you scream for help (HELP!!!!) -scream
we look at you and laugh
this is what you asked for (Asking for this)-scream
with all that you had
Stop resisting.....


Be honest. Does it suck?
#2
You may want to look @ the things you marked as to be screamed, some of them don't flow, others do.
Have you ever smoked a big fat cuban cigar
Have you ever hitched a ride on a shooting star
Have you ever seen red when you shouldve seen yellow
Have you ever been mellow?
#3
I sort of agree with the above poster, but other than that minor issue, I really like it!


For some reason it reminds me of something the band "Reveille" would sing. I think this song would fit perfectly in that genre of music. Here is an example of what I'm talking about:

http://youtube.com/watch?v=ChmOT69NQqw