Wrote this today when I was bored and thought I would post it here for some comments Sorry for not writing the solos but I prefer improvising while recording

Song Idea.zip
Last edited by Ceresz at Nov 12, 2007,
I like it, simple, but well written.

However, the one thing that I really didnt like was the Bridge guitar part. It seemed to me that it didnt flow very well at all, seemed very abrupt and jagged, and not in a good way.

Other than that, it was great.