#2
I like it, would love to see it finished
The only thing that didn't really work for me was the intro, sounded kinda out of time with all those constant time changes, you know?
Anyways, finish this
Crit mine?
Last edited by Ceresz at Nov 11, 2007,
#3
you should finish it, and I have to agree with the guy above me about the intro, the chords and the riff sound out of time, also you should add some lead work or variations to the power chords section cause it gets kind of boring. apart from that it's great, the harmonies, the bass line and all that. good job!

mind critting mine? (new one in sig) thanks.
#4
10x guys for the critics...i'll work more on the intro...and about the power chords, i was planning to improvise a solo there...but u're right some variation will make it better
(now checking yours)