Its pretty good, the vocals are the greatest. The guitar is kinda bland. The vocals in the chorus aren't very good, they don't seem to match up with the music. The drumming is great, the part after the first chorus is the best part, but i dont know if it should be after both choruses, i think you should treat it as a single bridge rather then a post-chorus. I like the lead guitar in the chorus. Good stuff, but keep working on it and it will be great!

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Its pretty good musically, the recordings sound really nice. It sounds like studio quality. The vocals aren't great but their not terrible either, good work.