#1
"Breathe In, Breathe Out, Hyperventilate, Pass Out..."
That twinkle in her eye,
Tells you that she's the one.
The one who you need,
The need who belongs...

In the warmth of your arms,
In the care of your heart.
The thoughts in your mind,
On the paper of your art.

I can't let go
not just yet.
History is repeating,
Over and over again.

And I won't let go,
I won't back down.
You can do what you want,
But I'll stand my own ground.

Is that not enough?
Is that what you need?
I'll give what you want.
Even if I bleed.
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I plan to add more later...but...for now I think this is good.
Tell me what you think!
#2
the song is pretty good, i love the title though.
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#4
I like the title. The song is solid right now, but I'm sure that when you add more and polish it up, it will be better. What you have is good starting point though.
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#6
Awesome

Crit mine?
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