#1
I've done wrong before
But never like this.
I feel like a fool who's mixed
Black and white, to get the gray.
I feel like my head keeps spinning
And my feet are lifting off the ground.

I feel like kicking myself.
I'm so ashamed of what I have done.
Leaving you broken and battered and lonely,
While I mock the name of the son.

It must have broke your heart.
It must have hurt more than the stakes did.
The tears weren't for your pain.
They were for the sinners who mocked your name.

--------------Solo------------

I feel your pain...
I'm so ashamed.
What happens when the colors mix
And there's no way to seperate them?
What happens....
What happens when white turns to gray,
And the wrong that you do outweights the right?

It must have broke your heart.
It must have hurt more than the stakes did.
The tears weren't for your pain.
They were for the sinners who mocked your name.

I am saved....
The colors seperate.
#5
ok i really like this one. I like the colors idea it's pretty genious. THe first verse doesnt flow as well as all the other ones but i still like it. The second verse is my favorite verse besides the first one but this one flows better for me. the third verse is sweet keep that the same i would say. the fourth verse is good but these 2 lines dont flow

What happens when the colors mix
And there's no way to seperate them? just fix this second line cuz i like the first one.

Overall i like it a lot its wicked good keep it up and post more.
CRIT MINE emptyness final