So yeah this is a little demo I made, playing guitar and singing.
It's on my profile.
Your voice is pretty good. The guitar is pretty bland, you could develop it a bit more tho. Its emo and your voice works well with that genre. I think this song could be pretty good with a band and distortion and power chords rather then acoustic chords. The chorus isnt very good. The vocals dont seem to fit well with the guitar. Keep working on it. I think it could be a really good song.

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