Pretty good stuff. I was expecting it to be some lame power chord crap, but actually was pretty cool. It was kinda repetitive, but nothing to really bother with changing. Vocals are ok. Recording quality is bad. The solo is good. Also, I noticed you were in 9th grade, same here! I think you could definitly improve on the song if you keep working on it, but it a good song!

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thanks alot, yah the recording is recorded on an mp3 player.
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haha... yeah no wonder its pretty bad quality. The song would be good if you had better quality music.