#1
Hey guys,
I just posted to short little tracks I have been working on. "Heart of Sludge" is a pretty sad, melodic piece I made the other day. "Cohesion" is a Coheed & Cambria inspired thing I made when I was feeling pretty happy and in the mood to write something in their style. They both are totally different from anything I'd normally write and play so I'm interested to hear what you guys think about them. Any input is appreciated!

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Thanks
Gear:
Schecter C-1 Hellraiser w/ EMG 81-85 Humbuckers
Peavey 6505+
Mesa/Boogie Rectifier 4x12 Slant Cab w/Vintage 30's
BBE Sonic Stomp
Boss TU-2
Boss NS-2
Boss DD-7
Danelectro Fish N' Chips EQ
#2
heart of sludge sounds like an alexisonefire interlude. cohesion is kinda cool. they both sound just like snippets of much larger songs. you should really try to expand them by playing around with new themes based on your existing guitar riffs and then you might have urself something that sounds like a really nice full sounding song.