#1
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Go easy on it

its just a baby


He was a good man though.

its the second song
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Last edited by guitargod5 at Nov 12, 2007,
#3
Sorry about your grandfather... I like the cool vibe beginning. Its different then most stuff. The vocals need to be a bit louder. The drums work well with the melody. You might want some guitar some where in the verse to add a little power, or in the chorus to make it stand out. I like the bridge, the bass sounds cool. Its a little repetitively with the same melody repeating. Work on a bit of variation. The lyrics are very good and meaningful. I can sense your sincereness just in your singing. Good song.

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#4
thanks

its a demo


im going to re record it soon, and change the melody on the cool.

i had a acoustic guitar, but i couldnt get it to fit well with the song.
ill get it here soon.
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#5
Wicked man this is a deep song. Your singing is coming from your heart. 9/10. Please crit mine in my sig thanks.
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