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just finished a new comic, tell me what you guys think



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"but i don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
"oh, you can't help that," said the Cat. "we're all mad here."
~lewis carroll
#2
Maybe I havn't looked into it enough, but what's your myspace got to do with it?

Yo-yo's that is.
#3
hmm i didnt get the last square
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#6
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Maybe I havn't looked into it enough, but what's your myspace got to do with it?

Yo-yo's that is.


Because I simply remember when yo-yo's were cool.
"but i don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
"oh, you can't help that," said the Cat. "we're all mad here."
~lewis carroll
#7
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erm, that cartoon isnt very funny.


Agreed, but no offence, even I could do better than that.
#8
here's another comic i did a few weeks ago.

"but i don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
"oh, you can't help that," said the Cat. "we're all mad here."
~lewis carroll
#9
...what are you, a christian group therapy worker?


"users are losers"
#11
Yeah, unfortunately it's fairly average.

And it was lame of you to have an unrelated thread title.


Yo yos will always be cool.

EDIT: The second one is better though.
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#12
ummmm


im going back to look at cyanide and happiness,
the ultimate wed comic.

sorry dude, cool drawings tho!!
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#13
Not very funny, even on a "lolz try hard internet" level.

Very well drawn though. That saves them.

May I ask, how did you draw them?

I ask because I am a naturally able drawer (I never practised but got A's), but haven't drawn in a long, long time. This makes me sad.

What programs did you use? Thanks!
#15
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Agreed, but no offence, even I could do better than that.

it's offense.

and i appreciate feedback, good or bad. this strip is just introducing a new character, so i didn't expect it to be grand.

if you people can think of ways to make it better, let me know.
"but i don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
"oh, you can't help that," said the Cat. "we're all mad here."
~lewis carroll
#17
Yeah I dunno, it feels kinda forced...

mordant orange however...

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#18
Quote by hydriplex
it's offense.

and i appreciate feedback, good or bad. this strip is just introducing a new character, so i didn't expect it to be grand.

if you people can think of ways to make it better, let me know.


im sure u cAN do better punclines.


hey also, im seconding that question about the programs u use?
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#19
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Not very funny, even on a "lolz try hard internet" level.

Very well drawn though. That saves them.

May I ask, how did you draw them?

I ask because I am a naturally able drawer (I never practised but got A's), but haven't drawn in a long, long time. This makes me sad.

What programs did you use? Thanks!

Everything is done in photoshop, with a wacom tablet. it takes me about 5 hours.
"but i don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
"oh, you can't help that," said the Cat. "we're all mad here."
~lewis carroll
#20
Quote by hydriplex
it's offense.


Well actually it can be either.

And honestly, who cares?

Cool drawings man.
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I know i wish i was as cool as you and be into Sum 41 and Taking back Sunday. Gaylord.

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you should call one of the songs, "Respecting Old People" just to mix things up.

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You just made a very powerful enemy BenFoffenbock.
#21
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What are you on about? Yo-yos are still cool.
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#23
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it's offense


Actually, the correct English is "offence"

if you people can think of ways to make it better, let me know.


Maybe you should make the comic strips have jokes in.
#24
Quote by Kensai
Yeah I dunno, it feels kinda forced...

mordant orange however...



Holy crap, can you buy that in card form? I need to get that for my bro.
#25
whats a wacom tablet? like a personall PC u can draw on?
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#26
According to the title, CAPS LOCK IS CRUISE CONTROL FOR COOL
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#27
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whats a wacom tablet? like a personall PC u can draw on?


more like a mouse pad you can draw on

[quote="'[x"]Huffy[x]']According to the title, CAPS LOCK IS CRUISE CONTROL FOR COOL

everyone knows that
"but i don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
"oh, you can't help that," said the Cat. "we're all mad here."
~lewis carroll
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Quote by Jackolas
Holy crap, can you buy that in card form? I need to get that for my bro.


I got it from: http://www.mordantorange.com/blog/archives/2007/06/structurally_de.html

Maybe the drawer knows

edit:

I thought this one was quite funny:

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#29
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I thought this one was quite funny:



It is .
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I know i wish i was as cool as you and be into Sum 41 and Taking back Sunday. Gaylord.

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you should call one of the songs, "Respecting Old People" just to mix things up.

Quote by вяaи∂ иєw
You just made a very powerful enemy BenFoffenbock.
#30
here's another one, for shiggles.

"but i don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
"oh, you can't help that," said the Cat. "we're all mad here."
~lewis carroll
#31
Yeah that one was WAAAAYY better, mostly cause of the "fun for the whole family" line.
Quote by kriscornella2@g
I know i wish i was as cool as you and be into Sum 41 and Taking back Sunday. Gaylord.

Quote by civildp1
you should call one of the songs, "Respecting Old People" just to mix things up.

Quote by вяaи∂ иєw
You just made a very powerful enemy BenFoffenbock.
#32
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Yeah that one was WAAAAYY better, mostly cause of the "fun for the whole family" line.

thank you for the kind words.

here is the prequel to that one:

"but i don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
"oh, you can't help that," said the Cat. "we're all mad here."
~lewis carroll
#34
Alright I reckon you've redeemed yourself with that effort .

Although the lead-ups have generally been better than the punchlines.
Quote by kriscornella2@g
I know i wish i was as cool as you and be into Sum 41 and Taking back Sunday. Gaylord.

Quote by civildp1
you should call one of the songs, "Respecting Old People" just to mix things up.

Quote by вяaи∂ иєw
You just made a very powerful enemy BenFoffenbock.
#35
yes they were quite funny lol good job on the redemtion
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#36
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Alright I reckon you've redeemed yourself with that effort .

Although the lead-ups have generally been better than the punchlines.


/bows

generally i really don't think of my comics as having a punchline, i just write for the whole comic and have some kind of ending joke.

and i always forget to include the fact that the bald one is the imaginary friend, which might make the first one i posted a little more ironic, so the invisible friends could play together.

a good example would be my tokyo storyline, some of the first ones i did that are about 4 times longer than a normal strip
"but i don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
"oh, you can't help that," said the Cat. "we're all mad here."
~lewis carroll
#37
Quote by sammi-ellen
yes they were quite funny lol good job on the redemtion

/salutes

and just for fun, here was part one of the tokyo storyline i was talking about

"but i don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
"oh, you can't help that," said the Cat. "we're all mad here."
~lewis carroll
#38
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/salutes

and just for fun, here was part one of the tokyo storyline i was talking about


HAHA

lol in a weird kind of way this makes me think really hard about humanity lol
hmm i might visit your website tomorow lol
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#40
you guys have been good sports, and thank you for the good and bad words.

i've only done about 13-14 comics, so i'm still trying to figure stuff out.
"but i don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
"oh, you can't help that," said the Cat. "we're all mad here."
~lewis carroll
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