#1
anyway, please comment these. and give some tips.

everyday bs.

i still remember these days
and i remember these nights
we buried this haze
it was a place for us to hide
your broken hand then obtained
the hidden piece that was locked
in the depths of my brain
in the chains of self-doubt

this rage explosion was then created
and we were thrown into
it's corrosion got accelerated
ate us all the way through
in this *** hurricane
my thought was running circles
it's hard for me to explain
there seemed to be no purpose

other one:
lifeguards.

time in my vein
flows like the cure
it tastes bittersweet
it tastes pure

i can see the end
when i don't look back
i know i can bend
i can change the tracks

break away with haste
they're along with me
there's no time to waste
only lifeguards could save me

fragments of this mirror
don't hurt me no more
instead i feel nearer
to my lost core

i still hold the balance
even when i fall
i still keep breathing
every time i'm left to crawl

break away with haste
they're along with me
there's no time to waste
only lifeguards could save me
#2
Please give the rules a read first, then you can repost this correctly.

Thanks
THW
Filth, pure filth... That's what you are.