#2
as usual, amazing. i love your songs. and this one is no acception
this has a very very professional feel to it. with the layering and whatnot. you have obviously put some effort into this song, and i think it is very good.
the lyrics are very your own. very unique. i love it.

great job

EDIT: Dammit I'm inspired. I wrote a song inspired by yours, except I can't get any lyrics for it
If I ever do () I will be sure to let you know so you can return the crit

Last edited by YourMessiah666 at Nov 13, 2007,
#3
Pretty cool. I like the cool feel of the song and the synth sort of thing. Your voice is extremely nasally, but it sounds actually sounds pretty good. Kind of repetitive, the chorus sounds alot like the verse. I really like i though. Your voice is good, the guitar is pretty cool, good chord progressions. The chorus is great. awesome job!

please comment back: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=704912
#4
thanks a lot you two. i'm really unsure about the chorus though...i agree that its similar to the verse. i just sort of tried to come up with something without letting it come to me. I don't know. I'm still open to changes if a better idea comes along.

to YourMessiah666- you should definitely send me a PM to return the crit if you post it...or anything for that matter. i would love to hear it.
#5
WOW! yeah pretty good...i can't get this song out of my head. would be cool if it be available for downloading. well, I really like the melody and the way the song goes on. really atmospheric. your lyrics are very good. reminds me a bit of elliott smith....Your voice is really cool and fits really good. I'm going to add you at myspace..**** you make good music

crit mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=712169
"I got my propaganda
I got revisionism
I got my violence
in high def ultra realism" - Nine Inch Nails "Survivalism"


But it's the same everyday drives you all insane
#6
WOW! Great voice. Complements the song very well.

Really good lyrics. Nice guitar too. Really cool.


Would you mind having a listen to "Air" in my profile and leaving me crit here?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=711474

Not got vocals yet but hopefully I'll finish them sometime soon.
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#7
very different and very cool. your vocals are very interesting and very confident which makes it really fun to listen to. love your song
#8
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i can't get this song out of my head.


back in your head?

bam!

i can really hear the t&s influence man, especially in the vocals. sounds mad.

good vocals, in tune, good tone and shiz. nice playing too.

i dig it, keep it uuuuuuuuup.

i'm adding you, that's cool yes?