#2
Today tomorrow and etc is a bitch.. it has totally no structure to it, it is like gone in
different directions without any meaning..

Interlude, now this is the better way, i'ts quiet but i feel the emotion.. there could be a
song made out of it..

song, the same as interlude..
cheers glenn.
#3
Thanks. I agree with you, Today, Tomorrow and etc. really sucks. But it is more of an Idea for a song, than an actual song. No set structure or anything. I meant to specify that.

I am trying to get vocals in Song but I think I will leave Interlude the way it is, but I will add humming voices to it (singing in the same key as the guitar.)

Thanks much for the Crit!
I wrote a song about war...
The kind that lives in your head.
#4
i'd say song is the best out of the three. It has the most structure and just sounds the best. The chord structure is pretty cool. I think you need a bit more variation in there tho, its a bit repetitive. The interlude is pretty cool. Tomarrow, today and etc song is my least favorite. All your songs need work, but i think they could get pretty good if you work at it.

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#5
I like them. My favorite is Empty Echoes. I think they could use lyrics. But good for having none. And by the way thanks for the crit.
I wrote a song about war...
The kind that lives in your head.
#6
I really liked your choice of chords, very different and original....but as you said, the recordings leave a bit to be desired.
Crit one or all of mine if you like. Just look for my name (slapfunk_101) in the original recordings forum, should be on the first or second page.