#1
well i'm not too sure about the name so if you have ideas for that it'd be cool too. right now all i have is the 1st verse and the chorus. i'll add the rest later.


today, to make it big
you gotta be a straitlaced, uptight fellow
no time to play our stupid game
there is only 36 hours left on the corporate sell out
"Go away! You punks make me sick."
well thats big talk for a corporate bitch
"This is private property. You're not supposed to be here."
whatever you say, just let me finish my beer
"Hey, you! Your not allowed to have that!"
well I was gonna offer you one but now I take it back
"That's it, I'm gonna call security."
fine I'd like to see those fat pigs catch me
"Hey you! Punk ass! Stop!"
haha hot damn they got a rent-a-cop
lets go!
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All work and no play
makes me wanna kill myself
and I'm not the least bit suicidal
hey stiffs, suits and fellow office workers
chill out and take some midol
cause your PMS is out of control!

cause my generation
just wants to have some fun
the revolution will be televised
the words will be sung
on the ashes of the desperate
seeking joy, just to pretend
that their life doesn't suck as much as they once...
thought!
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well thats it so far. let'er rip. C4C
When in doubt, sweep it out
Last edited by Halfmastmutiny at Dec 17, 2007,
#2
That's good, i like it In my head it's like rapcore but that's probably only because i love rapcore

What style is it ment to be?

Oh and i think my generation is already a song name
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Am i on fire? OHHH NOOOO!!! I'M ON FIREEEEEE

#3
Quote by clu291
That's good, i like it In my head it's like rapcore but that's probably only because i love rapcore

What style is it ment to be?

Oh and i think my generation is already a song name


That doesn't matter at all. There are so many songs that have the same name. Anyways, I think the lyrics are pretty good but in some places they seem a little too violent, kinda sound like there's something bothering you. 6/10
Crit mine please? It's in my sig
Last edited by k00kie M0nster at Nov 15, 2007,
#4
its supposed to be punk...i like punk...and metal....all music really, except country
When in doubt, sweep it out