#1
Verse 1
Your only confusing the words
That i'm throwing out towards you
I'm trying to let you know
The things that I want you to
But when things start to shake
It gives me a reason to break
Chorus
And it's just like the waves forming out in the sea
It's hard to be perfect when you are like me
We start off so far away till we meet in the end,
On the shore, but we go back out again
Verse 2
Low tides are coming
A storm is forming
Things aren't working out the way i pictured it would
And it makes me sick to know
This is all my fault

Chorus

Outro
So let's be the wave
We'll form one another
And recede together in the end
Let's be the storm
that will overcome every problem we will have
#2
Sounds a nice little acoustic song. I liked the outro the most though, but the line "And recede together in the end" doesn't really seem to flow as well as the rest of the last stanza, but I guess it's down to how it flows =]
#4
Quote by darkenedmalice
Verse 1
Your only confusing the words
That i'm throwing out towards you
I'm trying to let you know
The things that I want you to do?
What is it exactly you want them to ---?
Also, "You're only confusing".....Maybe just leave it as "You're confusing". Otherwise this doesn't make too much sense, in its current context.

But when things start to shake
It gives me a reason to break
Very predictable. I would change this.
Chorus
And it's just like the waves forming out in the sea
It's hard to be perfect when you are like me
Teen-angst, much?
We start off so far away till we meet in the end,
On the shore, but we go back out again
Okay, I like the idea you're trying to convey, but not a fan fo how you're executing it.
Verse 2
Low tides are coming
A storm is forming
Things aren't working out the way i pictured it would
And it makes me sick to know
This is all my fault
There's nothing particularly grabbing about this. It's been said before. You can say it better.

Chorus

Outro
So let's be the wave
We'll form one another
And recede together in the end
Let's be the storm
that will overcome every problem we will have
Decent outro


Overall, it's not bad. It's an idea that been done before, so you need to remember that and realize that you need to punch it up, make it unique, make it interesting. At times it was too predictable. It was also very blunt. Leave something more to the reader's imagination, eh? Let us figure out some stuff, too!
It was pretty decent, overall.
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